Redesigning A Picture Book

The purpose of a redesign is to improve the quality of a project in visuals, text, or both.

My debut picture book, Where Do Butterflies Go at Night? was released, to my great excitement, in August 2022. Unfortunately, two years later, my small Australian publisher advised me they were going out of business. The result? My beautiful book would disappear off the face of the Earth.

Was there anything I could do?The only option was to purchase the art and rights, and self-publish the book myself. The original book was published hardcover, 8.5″ x 11″. In looking at my possibilities, POD (print-on-demand) offered only one size in common – 8.5″ x 8.5″ – between two different printers if I wanted the option of soft and hard covers.

This required a redesign in format, and some major changes in the artwork itself, but also offered an opportunity for additional creativity.

One of the important changes I made in a redesign was to make it more clear what the book is about by rebalancing the title text. In the initial cover, the book’s subject is unclear unless you come up close. I added 2nd Edition to my redesigned book, so it was known that this was not the same publisher, and also enlarged the names of the author (me) and illustrator (Stella Maris Mongodi).

I also set up the interior of the book to more closely resemble a traditional picture book. One of those additions was a half-title page. I also included a dedication page up front, and bios for Stella and me in the back, none of which were included in the original book, but which I felt deserved to be there.

The book also has back matter, providing information about butterflies, their importance as pollinators, and ways a child reader can help them, thereby making a difference in the world. I redesigned this spread to make it lighter and more readable.

One of the greatest challenges in redesigning “Butterflies” was recreating Stella’s beautiful art into a different size and format., as mentioned above. Here I am deeply grateful for my artistic talent which enabled me to make these changes, and to Stella, who was willing, with her approval along the way, for me to make the changes to her original art.

This sometimes required cropping from the outer edges of the spreads, but often cropping from the inner edges where the outside needed to remain intact, and digital repainting to make it all work. My goal here was to make the final book look like that’s exactly how Stella created it. One of our favorite spreads is below. Hopefully you can’t tell what may be missing from the original spread!

And so ends the tour of what a redesign looks like, the challenges and happy results. If interested in a redesign of one of your projects (need not be a book), please feel free to contact me.

If interested in purchasing Where Do Butterflies Go at Night, 2nd Edition you can find it here on Amazon.

2024 – Ready to Self-Publish?

You have a story. Perhaps you have illustrated it. And you want to see your children’s book in print. You have submitted to publishers, but so far, have not gotten a `yes’. Time is slipping by and you’re not quite sure what to do.

Maybe it’s time to self-publish. Working with an experienced graphic designer who is also a published children’s book author and illustrator might be one of the best steps you can take to finally see your book in print.

I love helping authors bring their stories to children (and adults) who are waiting to hear what you have in your mind and heart. It’s a journey we share together with the best possible results – your story in a beautiful book.

Learn about how I help authors self-publish, and contact me when you’re ready to make your dream a reality.

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Is 2023 Your Year to Be Published?

Are those your hands typing away on your manuscript? Are you done yet? If you’re considering self-publishing, this is the time to get in touch with a graphic designer!

Look into what’s involved before you have art done. Find out how making a dummy can make all the difference in your finished picture book, and save you money!

I specialize in helping children’s book authors bring your story and ideas together, design a beautiful book for you, and get it ready for press.

Are you ready? Start learning what’s involved right here on my website, and contact me with questions and let’s make a beautiful book for you!!

Self-Publishing VIII – New Challenges

A recent self-publishing project has been my second with author, MJ Zonfrillo. The Boy Who Found His Talent is a picture book story of a boy who’s bored, but doesn’t know what he wants to do, and his journey to finding what that is. It’s always great working with someone I’ve worked with before; it makes the whole process easier and more fun.

Let’s look at some of the successes and challenges in creating this book. MJ does a great job of doing a dummy, but … it was put together for me after the illustrations were done and that created some missed opportunities.

The illustrator, who is very talented, never did a picture book before. Sandy’s forte is animals, so a complete book with humans presented some challenges, but MJ had taken care of all that before the art was presented to me. One of the things I would have liked to see done differently would have been a much more extensive use of 2-page spreads. In this book, there are only two.

The result was that there are too many pages with an illustration on one side and the opposite side has only a few lines of text, (see above.) This misses the opportunity to use full color throughout, but also gives the child reader far less to look at.

Another issue was not apparent until I received the art and that was that the artwork itself was not painted out far enough to provide for the full bleed for the page size. In some cases, the illustrations could be slightly enlarged, but in others, it meant my having to paint in areas to provide the needed bleed. Also, the scans, which had been made by a print shop, had a somewhat greenish cast to them, and much color-correcting had to be done.

The last challenge was that the illustrator had not been asked to do a separate image just for the cover, so MJ and I were left to figure out which interior images might be used for this purpose. As it turned out, this was pretty do-able and we were able to use one for the front cover, and a different one for the back cover.

All in all, it still went quite smoothly, and having a client who’s great to work with makes it all so much easier (and fun!) The Boy Who Found His Talent looks great with attractive front and back covers, and plenty of interest on the inside portraying a solid story, which also includes photos of the main character in his various theatrical endeavors.

What could have been done differently? As mentioned in earlier posts, there is a great advantage to working with the designer early on, and before giving the assignment to the illustrator. This could have provided many more 2-page spreads and a better use of the 4/color availability for picture books. This way the illustrator understands exactly what’s expected of him/her, especially if they’ve never done a picture book.

My second recommendation is to utilize an illustrator who has experience in picture books and understands all that is required to give me properly sized, finished art so I can just pop it in on the page. I spend more time than should be needed in correcting things, which adds to the final cost, and which would have been avoided if an illustrator experienced in picture books was hired.

So that’s it. Another great collaboration and another beautiful book finished!! Ready to start your self-published book? (Or other graphic design project?) Reach out; I’m happy to help!

Is This Your Year to Be Published?

It’s a New Year, and it’s time to think about where you’re headed. So many people have a dream of being published, of actually having a book in their hands that has their name on the cover as the author, and maybe the illustrator, as well. You may have that dream, too, but perhaps feel compelled to keep it a little quiet. After all, isn’t that a bit of a luxury to go and have yourself published? Maybe not.

Do you have something important, something relevant, or just plain fun, you’d like to share with children? Some part of your life experience that might make a difference to someone? Something you know or feel or dream about that could bring knowledge, a smile, or enlightenment to another. I believe we all have something to bring the world, and perhaps a book is the avenue for you to express it.

If you think you would like to be a self-published author, I’d be happy to help you achieve that dream. Above are just a few of the books I’ve had the privilege of bringing to life; each one has a post about it here on this site where you can read more. You can also find out more of what self-publishing is about on any of the tabs up top.

Is 2022 going to be your year to be published? Let me know!

What Grabs Your Attention?

When you’re looking at a few publications, what draws you in? It may be the subject matter, but given the subject matter is the same, where do you look? I’ll tell you – you look at something that is well-designed. You are likely not even aware of it, but that’s what grabs your attention.

Here’s an example. This is ZoonooZ, the official newsletter of Popcorn Park Animal Refuge. I’ve been its editor and designer for many years, and while I’ve always been evolving its appearance over time, recently I’ve been been able to make some exciting updates. What’s the difference?

Expanded use of color combined with use of the bleed makes for a much more attractive look. There was a time when using a bleed (extending color or graphics right out to the very edge of the page), upped the printing costs considerably, but with most printers nowadays the cost is the same or the difference, nominal. Result? More design freedom and a look that draws you in.

Here’s what the newsletter looked like 10 years ago. Working with a non-profit can mean keeping a close eye on expenses. Even 10 years ago, 4/color printing cost sufficiently more than 2/color that we stayed within an economical look in black and brown. With the wider availability of digital printing, prices for the two became comparable, and we brought the ZoonooZ into full color.

Here’s page 2 of the same two issues. While I was already moving forward with more inviting use of color and design in the winter issue (left), by the time we got to summer? I was having way more fun. And which overall look are you most drawn to? I suspect it’s the issue on right.

I say fun, because design work should be fun. That’s my thought, anyway. And knowing that good design can draw people in, means they’ll look longer and get more involved with the subject matter, in this case a wildlife refuge. And what do we always hope? For a non-profit, we hope that this will translate into donation dollars for the charity. In the case of a business? More sales.

If I can help you/your organization bring you more attention with some wonderful design, feel free to let me know!

Change Is Good – Especially in Design

Everything in life is always in a state of change; that’s just a given. But it can be a definite good thing when we’re bringing something new and attractive to the table.

Redesign is often a challenge, but when you’ve already been contemplating doing something new, it’s one of the best. Featured here are two covers of the official publication of the humane organization I work with. The cover with multiple images at left is from October 2020 and followed the format we’ve been using for quite some time, featuring multiple animals and their rescue stories. Even though we’d been doing that for a while, I’m still actually pretty happy with it, but it was time for something new.

I did a few mock-ups for a new design, and the cover below was declared a winner. I agree. Although it features only one animal, the photo is fantastic. There are some outstanding photographers on staff, and it’s not too big a chance to take to assume there will be plenty more great shots to choose from going forward.

I took the short index under the small cat photo in the “Inside” box, and went to a broader listing of the contents in a contrasting type color. There’s a subtle sheer black box behind the white text to help it stand out. And I went full bleed.

The result? Something that really stands out. It has been very well-received with plenty of compliments on the change. In addition, I have continued the redesign in the interior for even more appeal.

Take a quick look here, and you’ll see the evolution of this cover, starting back in 2007. However, I began working with them sometime earlier when that same cover was only two colors – primarily black and white with spot color in one signature.

Improving the look of an organization’s or individual’s communications works, and attracts more donors or customers. Change is good!

How can I help you? Please reach out!